Thursday, September 29, 2005

Pain


Should I curse you
or call you a lover
Your touch,
your embrace -
Reminds
I am alive!



another version....

Should I curse you
or call you a lover
Your touch,
your embrace -
breathes life into me
once again

blogged by Asmita at 5:05 am

2 Comments:

Blogger Known Stranger said...

the latter version is so sweet and touching

October 14, 2005 5:16 pm  
Blogger david raphael israel said...

It seems better in 2 versions!

(And remember: that can be a form;
the same utterance, varied in more
than one telling.)

cheers, d.i.

October 16, 2005 12:49 am  

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