retreat to myself
love you saw
as a binding;
I untangled the knots
and flew free.
expectations you said,
will tumble in;
there was just one -
can I offer myself
without holding?
don't come close
future I know not -
was your refrain.
it didn't matter
in knowing myself as love
I had found the answer.
This still doesn't feel right. It needs some more work....
as a binding;
I untangled the knots
and flew free.
expectations you said,
will tumble in;
there was just one -
can I offer myself
without holding?
don't come close
future I know not -
was your refrain.
it didn't matter
in knowing myself as love
I had found the answer.
This still doesn't feel right. It needs some more work....
1 Comments:
yes .. I think so.. sounds a bit rough.. but then dont take my word for it.. I'm just another amateur...
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