Friday, December 02, 2005

retreat to myself

love you saw
as a binding;
I untangled the knots
and flew free.

expectations you said,

will tumble in;
there was just one -
can I offer myself
without holding?

don't come close
future I know not -
was your refrain.
it didn't matter
in knowing myself as love
I had found the answer.

This still doesn't feel right. It needs some more work....

1 Comments:

Blogger Alien said...

yes .. I think so.. sounds a bit rough.. but then dont take my word for it.. I'm just another amateur...

December 03, 2005 3:11 pm  

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